SNEAK BITE: Swift was walking ahead of the party, eyes scanning the jungle floor and the living corridor they passed through for signs of frequent use. His off-white shirt was stained now with dirt and grass, with a long damp patch spreading down from his shoulders. His sleeves were rolled up to his elbows and Zach could see the silvery tracks of old scars traced across his muscular forearms. Swift glanced at him and smiled, the corners of his pale eyes crinkling. Zach wondered what it would have been like to have had Swift for a father. (from Adventures of Some Kid)
Its been three years now since www.trollking.co.uk was launched. I thought I’d take the opportunity to thank the 1780 web-surfers who have visited the site this year. Hey, THANK YOU VERY, VERY MUCH. I really do appreciate the support you all have given by visiting and leaving your comments. I must also apologise to the loyal visitors who check back every few weeks or month that The Changeling King has still not found a home with a publisher. Needless to say that the search continues. The authors who don’t get published are the ones that stop trying after getting a few knocks. I’m still behind Stephen King and J K Rowling in the number of rejection emails and letters I’ve received, but I’m kind of hoping to find a publisher before I catch up with them.
As is my penchant, I’m doing another read through of the Changeling King to try and slice off another 4000 words. Yes, another short story’s length of words trimmed away like last years mullet. The second draft of the Adventures of Some Kid is coming along slowly but surely and I’ve a few new short stories in various draft stages, so the magic is happening, albeit slowly.
I’m currently reading Philip Reeve’s Mortal Engines in paperback and Frank Herbert’s Dune on my htc smartphone. I’m playing Army of Two: The 40th Day and God of War 3. My current favourite websites to visit are IGN.com and Bookseller.com. Keep yer’ eyes peeled for more posts from yours truly. Keep Reading, Keep Writing.
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Whenever someone pops into their library and borrows a book, the author receives 6 pence. This is a legal right. But the coalition government, as part of wider cuts, is considering cutting this by 3%, which would make it a 10% cut over three years, in real terms. For many authors, the library is the only place where their book may be picked up, hence an important source of income and a way of assuring that the public continues to receive a wide selection of works to read. The Society of Authors is heading up a petition to protect this right, so please go to their site and sign up.
Authors’ Licensing and Collecting Society
I know this blog is supposed to be about writing, but I’m allowed to talk about what inspires me right? At the moment, its videogames that seem to be inspiring me, so shut up and let me talk. Okay, I’ve spent some time to read up on the latest announcement that have come out of Gamescon, basically one of many games conventions that take place across the world in mostly glamorous, sparkly cities. There is the obvious long list of sequels being announced, but a few stand out as something that would make even a hardcore gamer sit up. The first is that Mass Effect 2, the brilliant sequel to the awesome original X-Box 360 game that debuted earlier this year on Microsoft’s console. Only now its been announced that the game is coming to PS3 too! For those of you who haven’t played the original, its an RPG game that I think is on par with Bethesda’s Oblivion and Fallout 3. What works so well on this game is that the dialogue, which usually is tedious and takes up a big chunk of what make RPG games take so long to play, is in the control of the player, meaning you can ask all the questions or cut to the chase, and either intimidate or charm information out of the non-playable characters.
The other newsworthy item is the live action trailer for Resistance 3. The original title, Resistance Fall of Man, debuted as a launch title for the PS3 and had gathered a hardcore following since those early heady days of online death-matches on the PS3. The sequel had a better story mode but the multiplayer mode lost out to the superior Killzone 2. Follow the link and enjoy.
http://uk.media.ps3.ign.com/media/037/037866/vids_1.html
Sir Oliver Tressilian is the elder son of a man remembered by people as a foul-tempered despot and some of that bias has passed on to his son. Sir Oliver has paid of his father's debts and made his fortune by privateering in the name of the Queen, piracy by a gentler name. Now he is in love with Lady Godolphin, who has had a gentling effect on his troubled soul. But all is not well, for Lady Godolphin's brother, Peter, intensely dislikes Oliver due to their Guardian's dislike of the man, a grudge his father held against Oliver's father and the fact that he is amorously involved with a harlot with whom Oliver's brother, Lionel is also involved with. Lionel kills a somewhat drunk Peter, in a fight over the strumpet in a duel, but without witnesses, he is afraid of being called a murder. Oliver loves his brother dearly so he gives his word not to reveal Lionel, even though people begin to suspect Oliver himself, even the Lady he loves. Slowly the countryside turns against Oliver, but the biggest betrayal comes from Lionel himself, whose cowardly mind projects his own deficient scruples onto his brother, framing him and arranging for him to be trepanned, kidnapped and sold into slavery to the Barbary Coast.
Oliver is kidnapped by an old acquaintance who seeks to reveal to Oliver the betrayal of his brother, at a profit to himself, but his ship is overtaken by a Spanish galleon and sunk. The captain and Oliver are pressed into slavery, manning an oar on a Spanish ship, until Oliver's humanity is almost completely stripped from him. He is liberated by the chief of the Barbary corsairs, Asad. Oliver, in contempt of the way he has been treated by his Christian brethren and Lady Godolphin, converts to Islam and becomes one of Asad's lieutenants, carving a legend from his vengeance against the Spaniards and any other Christian ship that he happened up. His followers give him the name Sakr-ul-Bahr, the Sea-Hawk.
Oliver is infamous across the Christian world, and lauded the greatest sword of Islam in the Muslim world. He is rich beyond any man's desires, commands a fleet of ships and is beloved as a son to Governor Asad. But his own rage against his brother and former love, coupled with the conspiring wife and son of the Governor, everything begins to fall apart.
This book is written with a decent amount of research, but in parts is inaccurate in regards to Islam, perhaps based on the fact that Sabbatini only had access to Orientalist material. Despite this biased starting point, i.e. overly obsessed with fabled riches, hareems, colourful garments and slavery, Sabbatini does well to rise above the misinformation. A few points that I would like to clear up is that the treatment of slaves seems at odds with Islamic laws that compel the owners of slaves to treat them as if they were members of the family and the fact the freeing slaves was considered the greatest act of charity, the overall aim becoming then to abolish slavery by making it untenable. But profiteering of slavery seems to have overpowered these values, and the lot of galley slaves was the most abominable, both by Christians and Muslims. Also the ill-treatment of women, especially wives, goes against what is taught by Islam. Thirdly, and perhaps most importantly, Sabbatini's understanding of Islam seems to model it on Christianity, giving Mohamet (the Prophet Muhammad) almost a similar status as Jesus holds in Christianity. The Prophet Muhammad was very clear in his instructions that he is only a man that has been sent as a Messenger from God, albeit the last of all Prophets.Despite my misgivings of these details, important details from a historical point of view, they have little bearing on the actual plot. The story is well-written as is to be expected from the author of Captain Blood and Scaramouch. As a character, I prefer the genius and gentlemanly ways of Captain Blood to the vindictive Sir Oliver Tressalian, but I feel that the story-telling itself and the structure of the novel, the Sea Hawk, is superior to Captain Blood and its sequels.Again, this is a must for Sabbatini fans, those who enjoy a good adventure story and fantasy readers too. A thoroughly good read.
Goodreads | Noor Jahangir's review of The Sea-Hawk
Seven Earths Issue 1 is available to download from the Seven Earth's page and so far we've recieved some excellent feedback. In the meantime, keep reading and keep writing.
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