Book Review: Nightingale by David Farland

NightingaleMy rating: 4 of 5 stars

Nightingale is the first in a series of urban fantasy books by David Farland, bestselling author of the Runelord fantasy series and mentor to a whole new generation of bestselling genre writers. Nightingale is about a changeling boy named Bron Jones who has been raised through the social welfare system, bouncing from one family to another, rarely finding a place where he fits or is welcome. But then he meets Olivia Hernandez, a teacher in a performing arts school who is hiding a secret that will prove to be the key to Bron’s own past. Suddenly, Bron learns that the world is a lot bigger than he could ever have imagined and that he is the heir to the most powerful and evil being in the world; a fact that threatens his hope of ever having a normal life.
Its hard to critique the work of a man who has taught some of the biggest names in genre fiction how to write and can count thousands of writers as his students. I read an early draft of this book and found myself blown away by how gripping and near perfection it already was. When I picked up the finished version during the book-bomb effort to raise money for the Wolverton’s son, I had no idea that I would find this book as compelling the second time around too. The plot is as perfectly balanced as a samurai sword, arranged with the control of a great composer and realised like a fine painting.
The characterization is handled so well that I would have happily have continued reading this book, even if nothing fantastical happened, and even if the plot didn’t take a turn down a darker road. As a reader, it would be easy just to give this book five stars, and compared to many of the other books I’ve reviewed, this book is a five star read.
So why didn’t I give it five stars? If anything, its because this book is almost too perfect, too well-crafted, like a finely engineered sports car that seems to have lost the spark of fun and passion that gives it character. Perhaps its because as a writer myself and a student of David Farland, I can see the various influences (Twilight, Harry Potter, Hunger Games, Immortal Instruments), brought together and woven into a single tapestry, or perhaps I miss the clean and simplicity of the early draft I read, or more likely, my expectations of this book were much higher than is fair.
One thing is for certain, this series is definitely one of the best YA series out there, and will no doubt be made into a blockbuster series of films. Buy it, read it and despair of ever matching it.

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Book Review: Sean Benham’s Blope

BlopeBlope by Sean Benham

My rating: 1 of 5 stars

BLOPE is an sf story set in an alternate reality in which Taiwan (the Eternally Free Taiwan) is the world power, and its Emperor has won a big chunk of America in a Russian Roulette game against the US President. The Emperor decides to run an experiment based on some screwball theory that the colour of the skin determines your level of intelligence (an actual theory), and decides to split America up into prefectures based on skin tone. The theory is disapproved but the Emperor has a good thing going so leaves the Prefectures as they are. With this as the backdrop, the story features a battle between good and evil, with Satan and the Church battling for control of the new Messiah: Clint Masters and his grandson, Billy.
Benham opts to begin his story with the conclusion and then start from the beginning and build the story up to the same point. This works well in tv series where the viewer has a good idea of who the main character is and what has happened so far in his recent past. It may even work for detective stories in which the point is to give the audience a cliffhanger and then build up to the point, before the protagonist somehow manages to overcome the odds. It does not work in Sf and fantasy and especially in the way Benham has done it, with the opening chapter literally being the conclusion.
Blope’s problems do not end there. Aside from the misjudged opening, you do not meet the protagonist again for at least a quarter of the book, where the author instead decides to flesh out the setting of the novel and the back story that could have been summed up with a little exposition later on. The attempts to be shocking fall short of what is the standard in this sub-genre and rarely exceeds bad taste. The humor also falls flat as it relies on physical deformities rather than character faults. Benham makes a decent effort at giving the protagonist an inner voice, but there are little in the way of eye opening insights beyond the normal teenager with raging hormones.
There were many instances when I felt like putting this book down and starting another, but the strange storyline and decent world-building kept me interested enough to force my way through the average prose and going nowhere quick plot-line.
I wish there was more to commend this book for, but I can’t think of any reason to recommend this as a passable read, except that its definitely one of the stranger stories that I’ve read so far this year.

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Worlds Without End

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This is going to be a sort of companion piece to my recent post One Hundred Realms. In that article I discussed the various genres and sub-genres within the fantasy field. I think that most people would agree that, whatever type of fantasy novel you're writing or reading, an intricately detailed world is likely to be at its heart. Indeed the very act of world-building - i.e.

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Book Review: Shianshenka, the Rise and Fall of the Perfect Creation by Rowen Sivertsen

Shianshenka, the Rise and Fall of the Perfect Creation
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This isn’t my normal reading fare. What initially piqued my interest was the author’s ambitious attempt at creating a multimedia experience by linking in animated videos, pictures, lyrics and musical notes and performances. So I took a chance and accepted the request for a review.
The art direction for the cover and illustrations is colourful and whimsical, and is somewhat misleading to the quality of the writing within, however it does fit with the nature of the story itself. The multimedia sections are also interesting to start of with but become distracting after awhile, but I dutifully followed every link, watched the almost psychedelic videos and listened bemusedly to the author’s acoustic and vocal renditions of the songs from the book. Quite honestly, I feel the book would be stronger without the multimedia content. If the music and the images could have been embedded into the book then perhaps they would have added some value.
The basic storyline is that a scientist from Earth has invented an artificial lifeform known as Zhongzi to explore and record environmental data on an inhospitable world, Shianshenka. The lifeforms come to life whilst falling, using the air resistance to power their dynamos and allow them to record and reflect. However, once the Zhongzi are released by the scientist, the lifeforms begin to develop their own language, culture and racial identities dependent on their original design and calling. Their development of society reflects perhaps the development of human society and the story maps their struggles to colonize the island they have landed on and to achieve a perfect society.
The writing is brilliant in the way that it doesn’t draw attention to itself but instead gently creates a sense of wonder at the beauty of these both simple, and yet at the same time complex lifeforms.
It is criminal that this work hasn’t received the attention it deserves because it does what all literature aspires to do, to tell the human story in a way that inspires and urges us to reflect upon our own mortality and our ambitions to achieve beyond our limitations.
This book is a postmodern classic and should be canonized amongst essential literary works to read. Therefore, despite the multimedia content, this book has earned the highest accolade of 5 stars.

Upcoming Reviews for March and April 2013

This is what my reading list is looking like for March and April. Up first is Peter James West’s The Information Cloud, the first book in the dystopian Tales of Cinnamon City. Next up is Shianshenka, the Rise and Fall of the Perfect Creation, Rowen Siverston’s psychedelic multimedia book that explores the meaning of life, and finally, Sean Benham’s Blope, set in an alternative history of America and taking a very irreverent angle on religion. 

Book Review: Perfect Weapon, Double Helix #3

Perfect Weapon (Double Helix, #3)My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is book three in the Double Helix series. If you haven’t read the first two books, then you should take a hint and go read them before you finish reading this review. The Double Helix series has already won a number of awards for author Jade Kerrion and it is easy to see why with this latest installment.

The story picks up over a year after the events of Perfect Betrayal. Danyael Sabre, the protagonist of the first two books, an alpha empath with remarkable healing powers is chained up like a rabid beast in a super-max prison, with an electric collar around his neck that electrocutes him every 60 seconds. The good days are the ones where the guards come in and spray him with freezing jets of water, because then the shock from the collar knocks him out for several hours and at least then he is free from pain until his nervous system comes back online. Luckily, the super-max is hit by a militant group, called Sakti, that seeks to liberate imprisoned mutants and Danyael is one of the many they rescue. When Danyael does regain consciousness, he finds himself in Elysium, a retreat for human derivatives that is out of the reach of the public and given clemency by the US government. But when Danyael seems finally to have found a place where he can live in peace, Elysium comes under attack and somehow a fail-safe is tripped, which results in the compound blowing up. Danyael manages to escape with Reyes, the man who ran the retreat, but is shocked to learn that the Mutant Affairs Council (like the X-Men) were behind the attack on the retreat and that they were looking for him. Incredibly, it is the Mutant Assault Group, a military task force and the people who had ripped out his memory in the first book, that offer Danyael safe haven. But all is not as it seems . . .

Danyael Sabre is probably one of the most interesting characters in science-fiction, his empathic and healing abilities making him the perfect Christ figure, bearing in mind the amount of pain that is afflicted on him, and it is easy to see why readers can become very attached to this character. To add spice to this is his inability to have a normal human relationship, due to his psychic shields that have the side-effect of repelling people, despite his desperate need for love and friendship. His closest friends have all betrayed him in the past and the one person who was like a brother to him has been psychically brain-washed to hate him on sight, and the woman he is love with is a stone-cold mercenary that has a very complex attachment to him.

The plot is much more focused than the previous installment, with plenty of twists and depth. The pacing is much better than the previous installment, but there is a point early on where I felt that it could have done with slowing down a little to build up more of a sense of loss when taken away from Danyael. The world-building is just as solid as before and continues to expand the reality in which the story is placed. The writing itself is fluid and descriptive without drawing attention to itself.

When I read the first book, Perfection Unleashed, I compared it to Heroes and Alphas, and whilst this series still bears some resemblance to the lore of those television shows, Double Helix is far more exciting and hi-octane and in a league of its own. This is a well-deserved 4 out of 5. Near perfect but just shy of greatness.

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Review: Perfect Betrayal by Jade Kerrion

Perfect Betrayal (Double Helix, #2) My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is the sequel to the award-winning Perfection Unleashed. It starts where the original left off. Danyael Sabre, the world’s most powerful empath arrives home with no memory of the last two days. At his apartment he finds a beautiful and dangerous mercenary waiting for him, Zara Itani. She knows him but he has no memory of her. Immediately, he finds himself attracted to her, even though he can feel the hate for him rolling off from her. Mentally and spiritually exhausted from emotions that he has recently absorbed and physically broken by having been shot recently and having walked home from the airport, the last thing he needs is Zara’s aggressive feelings battering his empathic shields, but he’s stuck with her because she has promised the only person that Danyael counts as a friend, Lucien Winter, that she will keep him safe. Its a good thing too, because within 24 hours, Danyael is going to become the target of every human and mutant law and enforcement agency in the US.
The Double Helix trilogy sets it’s stall in the mutant/superhero genre and the powers and world-building will be familiar to anyone who has read the X-men or Watchmen comics or even seen the films. What Kerrion has done is that she has added to the tropes of the sub-genre by adding in human derivatives, such as Xin, cloned using the genes of a Chinese Empress and military strategist, and Galahad, the genetically perfect human being that shares the face of Danyael Sabre. The grand conflict in this world is a triangle with the pro-human lobby, the Mutant Affairs Council and the Mutant Assault Group, with the US government in the middle.
Perfect Betrayal lacks the focus of the first book in the trilogy, brought by the central thread of Galahad and the abominations. In the original, a collision between the two was inevitable and created a central axis for the rest of the plot. In Perfect Betrayal this isn’t immediately evident, even though you have the delicious duel of personalities between Danyael and Zara, the perfect love-hate relationship that is the subject of many rom-coms. There is a central story thread here too, but Kerrion takes a while getting it to, though the interim is made quite enjoyable by the latter relationship. The pacing is also quite different from the original, as the plot reaches a climatic set-piece in the middle of the novel, with the second-half of the book revealing the main plot. A second major set piece arrives at the end of the novel, but fizzles instead of sizzles with a missed opportunity for a grand battle between the two mutant factions.
This is still a very enjoyable piece of writing, with compelling characters, interesting pacing and interesting concepts. Its actually a very good read compared to much of the rubbish out there at the moment. In some ways this book is better than the original and in other places there are some missed opportunities. This is a good solid read and I look forward to the third volume in the trilogy.

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Book Review: The Emerald Forge by Manda Benson

The Emerald ForgeMy rating: 4 of 5 stars

The Emerald Forge is a return to the world of Pilgrennon’s Children,in which an unscrupulous scientist experimented on human embryos to combine technology with the human mind. The first was lobotimized, the second and third developed severe autism and the fourth turned into a sociopath, but the fifth, with the help of a prototype synapse resulted in Dana Provine.
But the world has changed since the events of Benson’s original, Pilgrennon’s Beacon. A Meritocracy has risen to replace Western Liberal Democracy in Britain, and Jananin Blake, Dana’s genetic mother, has become a powerful figure in the new political climate. Dana herself has returned to her adoptive parents along with her autistic brother, Cale, and is struggling for acceptance in her local high school without giving away her secret; the ability to communicate with anything that gives off a signal. But everything changes when she encounters a cybernetic wyvern that has been sent to kill her. Dana traces the wyvern’s source signal to a nightmarish place known as the Emerald Forge, where someone is carrying out illegal experiments on animals and using the very same synapses that flow through Dana’s blood.
The Emerald Forge is set in an alternate world in which an unwitting terrorist attack has changed the socio-political structure of Britain. The author attempts to explore the theme of meritocratic system, drawing out the potential benefits and ultimately, the flows in the system that lead to the dilemmas that are central to this story. The genre that this book would fit well in would be cyberpunk, and yet the cultural aspects of cyberpunk are starkly missing from the gritty world-building of this series. The characters are unique and immediately iconic, as is the author’s style which sets this book apart from other dystopian tales written in the past twenty years.
The science and politics that form the components of the world-building in this story could have been handled with a lighter touch, making the physics and the higher concepts easier to grasp, but despite this shortcoming this book is definitely a hidden gem that deserves respect and a big following.

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Book Review: Life of Pi, by Yann Martel

imagesMy rating: 5 of 5 stars

A boy on a boat with a tiger hardly sounds like something that could hold your attention over 401 pages.
You will find the Life of Pi filed under Literary works, although Wikipedia claims its a fantasy adventure, which I am sure many readers would contest. But the story does contain strong elements of fantasy and therefore it is one of those books that will uncomfortably straddle a number of genres. The book won the Man Booker Prize in 2002 and is now a multi-oscar nominated film too.
The protagonist, Piscine Molitar Patel, Pi Patel for short is a second-child from Pondicherry, India, where his father ran a zoo in the botanical gardens. Changes in the political climate leads Pi’s father to make the decision to sell the animals to zoo’s in other parts of the world and to move his family to Canada. The ship that carries Pi, his family and the a great number of the zoo’s residents is mysteriously wrecked, with Pi as the only human survivor, cast adrift in a lifeboat. His companions are a Bengal Tiger, an Orangutan, a Hyena and a Zebra. Unlike any other castaway, Pi has to survive not only the terrors of the seas, but his fellow castaways too!
The above summary encapsulates the basis of the plot but there is far more to the book then that. Martel evokes colours, smells and flavors in a way that very few writers have mastered, bringing every aspect of the life of Pi Patel to be vividly reconstructed in the readers mind. The language has the same ‘bombast’ as would be appreciated by Indian English speakers and the plot is unfolded with opulence of a table spread in a South Asian home.
Why is a fantasy author waxing lyrical about a ‘literary’ book? Its simple. Good writing that has excellent plotting and characterization is what we seek in every read. The Life of Pi delivers strongly on both accounts. For that reason, Life of Pi fully earns the rare accolade of five stars from me. If you have a ‘Read a novel’ on you bucket list, then this is definitely one you should consider.

Review: The Golden Queen, A Masterclass in Resonance

The Golden Queen (The Golden Queen, #1) My rating: 4 of 5 stars

David Wolverton (better known by his pseudonym, David Farland) is a master of utilizing resonance in writing, a fact that is starkly evident in the Golden Queen. The book resonates strongly with the Star Wars mythos, which makes sense as Wolverton has written a number of Star Wars expanded universe novels during his long career as an author.

The Golden Queen, begins like a typical fantasy story, with a young warrior (Gallen O’day) seeking his next adventure in a tavern. The setting seems to be an alternate Ireland, complete with talking bears, ogres and Sidhe haunting the forest. But that illusion is soon cast aside with the entrance of old warrior and his alluring charge. The newcomers are actually genetically engineered aliens from another world. Gallen takes a commission from the old warrior to help protect his charge, the last of a people known as the Tharrin, genetically made to be perfect and a natural leader, to a gateway between worlds (kind of like a Stargate) activated by a portal key technology. Unwittingly, Gallen and his companions, a young bar maid called Maggie and his bear friend, Orick (Wookie anyone?)follow the aliens through the gateway and discover that there is a bigger universe beyond their own existence. The universe however has fallen sway to a race of insectoid empire-buildings, with a heirarchy based on the beauty of a tribal/clan “golden queen” and the strength of her “lord protector”.

What follows is a rather intelligent science-fiction novel, blended with romance and sword-play (you could call it a space opera) that reaches for the epic scale of Frank Herbert’s Dune but falls short. There are some original concepts in here that have appeared in later Hugo winning short-stories, which show Wolverton’s pedigree as a writer of Sf.

The book is extremely well-written, the characters interesting and provocative. The plot and concepts challenge social norms like any good sf/fantasy book, and as well as the carefully constructed resonances with other narratives, there are original concepts that leave your mind spinning in wonderment.

This is a masterclass for any writer wanting to study the use of resonance in writing and a rather epic tale of sword and science fiction that will delight readers of Frank Herbert and Robert Jordan.

P.S. If you are new to the concept of resonance or are a writer who wants to polish their craft more, I strongly advise that you download a copy of David Farland’s Drawing on the Power of Resonance in Writing, for your Kindle (links to Amazon UK). Its relatively cheap for £1.92, considering what you will gain from it.

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